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On the whole, I love this picture. Your daughter is darling and you captured her smile perfectly. It engages you and makes you want to smile in return. You also were able to catch the laughter and love in her eyes. The dress too is well done. I only have two suggestions for you.
1) Her right eye (my left) seems a bit too far in.
2) Her right hand also seems a little stiff. I think it might have to do with her wrist.

All in all, a wonderfully drawn piece. Thank you for sharing it with us on DA.
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CommonMime Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much, this is very helpful. I haven't done a lot of drawing in many years so the feedback helps a lot. 
Tamuril2 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist
Thanks for taking it (my cons) so well. I'm always nervous giving them, seeing as I'm not a great artist myself. If it helps ou, I'm honored. Keep up the good drawing.
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